date: 23 nov 2007
I dream a world where I am not me
and you are not you to be,
I say no countries,
no to boundries,
All of us free,
yet being others' key..
No religion didnt i say
nobody being a prey,
Open lands,
Open minds,
Thoughts flowing through the wine,
and hey nothing yours and nothin mine
I dream a world where I m not me..
and you are not you to be
plz do give your much needed comments and suggestions... and loving critisism
also if you have any doubt i will be glad giving clarifications....
thnks for reading... keep coming
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7 comments:
m impressed
it suggests us about utopian world of kabir
poem me kafi openness hai
it reminds me of one poem of rabindranath tagore
.....where the mind is held high....quite famous
sorry ..
whre the mind is widout fear and head is held high
an attempt of our very own angrez kabir....
good going...
like the thought behind the poem...
all the best!
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